AP – College Essay revise

Today you will share what you have for your essay/supplement with a partner and work on revision. Remember, revision is where the magic happens and therefore you will do it a lot for these essays. By the end, you will be grappling over articles (the, a, an, etc.).

1. Ask three questions on your paper for your partner to read for

2. Share your document with your partner so they can edit

3. read and answer the questions on the document or in comments

4. read and answer the following:

Does this read “real”?

Is there something unique to the writer happening in the paper?

What is one phrase that you want expanded?


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